Monday, November 23, 2009

Notorious -- Nate Attebery


Hi Nate, This is a nice sketch, but I agree with you, it could be pushed further. First of all, I think a crop of your figures makes things much more "tight" and adds a nice tension. As we discussed before, you've covered the "love triangle/complicated relationships" part, which is great. Also, I like how it looks as if the two characters in the front are sort of hiding. What about the other parts of the movie? In re-reading the plot description, it is clear that the theme "spies" is pretty big and could be somehow added to your poster. The worried expression on the female character's face seems appropriate. But how about playing with a different expression for the male character? Determined or angry or even a smirk could work. I think it could add some more diversity to the poster. It might be good for you to read over descriptions of the movie to see if you can capture the mood/basic story lines in your poster. Has potential to be a great piece.

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